Peer Feedback

Joe Bryant

Your blog is really good and full of photos and vidoes rather than just broing text which is good. Everything you've uploaded you've explain why's it's good or not so good. Also you've used different types of things such as prezzies and you tube videos to explain how you want your magazine to look.

Your music magazine is good as the three colours work really well together however there are a few blank spaces where you could put in some more things to make your magazine look more lively. Also you could add a footer to include more conventions to your front cover. Also your masthead needs to be bigger and needs to stand out more.