This contents page is very good, It look very professional and I like the colours are very conventional as they  match your front cover. The pull quotes and competitions are very grabbing and would definitely appeal to your selected target audience.

My only criticism would be that there is a fair bit of space that is wasted in the section of what's going to be in your magazine. I would have made the text much bolder and grabbing for your audience so they are automatically pulled into reading what going to be in your magazine - this would also make them want to buy it if the stories were interesting.

Ben Naylor.